Please Read the Instructions Carefully- your mark depends on it!!!
What we want to see in your essay
We will be looking for the following three elements:
1. Demonstrated familiarity with assigned reading
The primary purpose of these assignments is to analyze the arguments in the reading. Papers MUST
demonstrate familiarity with the assigned reading relevant to your topic. Papers must make reflective
and accurate reference to the views presented in that reading. Papers that appear to be put together
from class notes and slides alone are unsatisfactory (but please use your notes and review the slides
as well!).
One way to demonstrate familiarity with assigned reading is to quote from it; all quotes require
appropriate citation (page numbers, source title). Note that using direct quotes without proper
attribution constitutes plagiarism.
This paper should be entirely in your own words (except for quotes from the primary text),
demonstrating your understanding of the material. If you happened to developed an idea while reading an
outside source and want to use that idea in your essay, even if your idea is not identical to what you
read, you need to cite that source as well (this is not simply to avoid the appearances of plagiarism;
it is also the standard practice in academic writing) You can find the Toronto guide on how not to
plagiarize here: http://www.writing.utoronto.ca/advice/using-sources/how-not-to- plagiarize
2. Critical awareness
Essays must also demonstrate critical awareness; that is, arguments and potential counter-arguments
must be presented. An argument is a piece of reasoning; it is not simply a conclusion. An argument
consists of a conclusion and reasons for that conclusion. Without the supporting reasoning, the
argument has simply not been stated. Thus, in a philosophy essay, never say simply “So-and-so thought
such- and-such (significant conclusion)”; always say “So-and-so thought such-and-such because … ” and
then lay out So-and-so’s reasons.
You are NOT expected to present “new” positions or break any new ground (please refrain from attempting
to do so here). You are NOT required to “state your own views” (unless specifically noted in the
particular essay topic instructions).
3. Clear writing (Reasonable, but not perfect, English skills are important)

Formal class essays must demonstrate competent English writing skills. Correct grammar, spelling, etc.
are essential to communicating your thoughts. Numerous grammar and spelling mistakes make your writing
less clear, and thus negatively affect your grade.
Please be especially careful to AVOID:
• Misspellings of authors’ names
• Misspellings of contractions
• Misspellings of the following words: affect, argument, believe, causal, conceive, conscious,
consistency, definition, effect, empirical, existence, inherent, it’s, its, knowledge, necessary,
occurrence, phenomenon (singular), phenomena (plural), philosophy, soul, supersede, than, then, their,
there, they’re
• Errors in subject-predicate agreement
• Run-on sentences
• Sentence fragments
• Misuse of the apostrophe
Remember your audience!
The imaginary “audience” for your writing is a bright teen-ager, or an ordinary adult not educated in
philosophy – someone who knows nothing about the subject matter but can follow an argument. Imagine you
are a lawyer writing for the jury (not for other lawyers). Define all technical terms, use plain
English and straightforward sentences.
Formatting & Submission Instructions
Submission:
Essay 1 is due to TurnItIn by 12:59pm (before the first Tutorial) on Friday Oct 16th.
Either bring a paper copy of your essay to your Tutorial on Oct 16th and/or send your TA an electronic
copy- whichever he requests.
Late papers will be lowered 1/3 of a letter grade for each day late, unless you are in the hospital, in
jail, or trapped under something heavy for days.
Formatting:
Your essay should have your student number and TA’s name in the header of every page. To make your
paper readable, please stay close to the following:
• 12 point Times New Roman font.
• Margins set at 1.25” Right, 1.25” Left, 1” Top, 1” Bottom. (this leaves your TA room to
write comments on your paper.
• Double-space the text!
• Your essay needs to include a “References” section, whether or not you directly quote the text. You
can find the Toronto guide on citations and references here:
http://www.writing.utoronto.ca/advice/using-sources/documentation
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Very Important:
Word limits have a purpose! Essays should be 1,250 – 1,750 wds in length (~4-6pgs). Put the word count
at the bottom of your essay before the “References” section (the word count does not include the
“References” section). Please be advised, your TA will stop reading your essay after the 1750th word,
so be concise. This is not a joke. Your TA has approximately 10 days to read very carefully through
approximately 60 of your classmates papers and give helpful, instructive, comments on each . Word
counts are strictly limited to allow you ample space to answer the questions asked in the writing
prompts and limit “grading fatigue” so that each student receives the best feedback possible from their
TA. Students who go beyond the word count are in essence taking more than their share of their TA’s
mental effort- word limits make the grading process as fair as possible for all students.
Essay 1 is worth 20% of your total grade.
Essay 1 Topics
Suggestions for how much time to spend on each part of the writing assignment are given in parenthesis
[ (short), (longer), etc.].
Topic 1. Dennett, “Where Am I?”
Part 1 (short): Briefly describe Dennett’s “Where Am I?” (make sure to only include details of the
story that will be relevant to decisions about the location of Dennett’s self as you will examine it in
the sections below.)
Part 2 (short): Dennett entertains at least four possible locations for “himself”: a) where his brain
is
b) where his body is
c) wherehispointofviewis
d) both where his brain and his body are (2 places at once)
Briefly explain (state in your own words) the reasons Dennett gives for treating each of these four
places as possible locations for his “self”.
Part 3 (longer): Explain which (if any) of the views of the self that we have discussed in class would
correspond or conflict with choosing each of these four locations as the location of Dennett’s self.
(In part 3 your should say something about each of the locations a-d.)
Part 4 (longer): Your thoughts! Which of options a-d above do you think is the best candidate for the
location of Dennett’s self? Explain why you choose that location over the others (that is, give your
reasons for thinking it is the best answer). If you think all options a-d have equal merit, explain why
you think that is the case.
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Topic 2: Williams, “The Self and the Future”
Williams’ article contains two cases:
a) First case: a machine that allows people to “change bodies”
b) Second case: an evil tyrant has you in his power, and is telling you about bad things he will do
to you soon.
Part 1: Describe both of these example cases (short), and the intuitions that Williams thinks each of
them supports (medium). Be concise in your description and only include points relevant to the
questions asked in the writing prompt.
Part 2: Williams points out that there is a difference between these cases, but that it doesn’t seem to
be a significant difference.
State what this difference is and why Williams thinks it doesn’t matter. (medium)
Part 3 (answer in two steps- 3a &3b below): Here you will explain what you would choose (that is, which
you think is the right choice) if presented with the options given in the ‘body switching’ example.
You and some lucky/unlucky individual B will be put into the machine Williams describes in the first
case. Afterwards, one of the resulting people will have a moderate headache, and the other one will
receive millions of dollars. The decision of which person gets which treatment is completely up to you
before the procedure.
3a (very short): Before the procedure, you are in Body A. State which you would choose:
i. After the procedure, the A-body person gets the money, and the B-body person gets a
moderate headache.
ii. After the procedure, the B-body person gets the money, and the A-body person gets a
moderate headache.
3b Your Thoughts! (longer): Why do you make the choice that you make? What are your reasons?
Topic 3: Williams & Parfit- Surviving the Teletransporter
Part 1: The Standard Teletransporter:
Suppose that you enter a cubicle in which, when you press a button, a scanner records the states of all
the cells in your brain and body, destroying both while doing so. This information is then transmitted
at the speed of light to some other planet, where a replicator produces a perfect organic copy of you.
Since the brain of your Replica is exactly like yours, it will seem to remember living your life up to
the moment when you pressed the button, its character will be just like yours, and it will be in every
other way psychologically continuous with you.
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(Topic 3: Williams & Parfit- Surviving the Teletransporter, continued) Do you survive the
teletransportation process?
Explain how Williams and Parfit would view this problem. What would each take to be the relevant
factors to decide whether or not you have survived? (medium)
Part 2 (answer in two steps- 2a & 2b below): The Slightly Delayed Teletransporter:
When you press the button, your body will not be destroyed right away. In fact, you are able to talk to
the duplicate via satellites for a few minutes while they warm up the disintegrator. (The technology
itself doesn’t require that your body be destroyed, you see, but it has to be destroyed for legal
reasons).
2a: (longer) Would either Parfit or Williams have a different view of whether and/or in what way you
survive this variation of teletransportation than they would in the non-delayed version? Explain the
differences, if there are any.
2b: (medium) Your Thoughts! Explain how you would view this variation on the problem. What do you take
to be the relevant factors to decide whether or not you have survived the transporter with the “slight
delay”?
Topic 4: Parfit, Williams, and Regeneration in “Doctor Who?” (extra challenging!)
